Score: 6

"Good, but needs improvement."

submission: Little White Bunny

date: May 24, 2006

I really liked the style of the artwork, but the frameate was too jittery and the sound was way out of sync.

Although it's supposed to be a short, it really needs more content.

So if you could get more content in it, fix the avove problems, it could be really good!

Score: 9

"I actually Lolled"

submission: U.F.S.

date: February 24, 2006

The joke was really unexpected, I like it! The only thing that could be improved upon are the graphics, but they are still pretty good.

Score: 8

"Great Effort"

submission: X's Awakening

date: February 6, 2006

I can see you've put a lot of work into this and it's of very high quality, but it's far too slow paced, especially at the start, I was quite bored throughout. The dialogue was also quite poor, it was difficult to hear and a bit dull.